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    dots Submission Name: Screamdots
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    Author: ARCHIE
    ASL Info:    37 YOA Male in Africa
    Elite Ratio:    2.44 - 90/126/40
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsScreamdots
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    Scream
    forget, "its all over bar the shouting"
    and scream
    past errors life learned
    forget them all
    shout quiet into darkness
    shout bright into the light
    scream for all the passion
    scream cause its all right
    theres no point being silent
    it seems so sad you see
    that only in the darkness
    the light of life
    we see




    Submitted on 2005-04-15 07:57:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really like this write. It makes me think of my own feelings. I can relate to the feeling shown here "it seems so sad you see that only in the darkness the light of life we see" . Keep up the good work.
    | Posted on 2005-04-15 00:00:00 | by ThatWasOnceMe | [ Reply to This ]


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