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Author: cuddledumplin
ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
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Words: 55
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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From now on
I'll see things differently.
My eyes will not be new,
but I'll use them as never before.
I'll look for beauty
amongst the faithless and sad
and find what I never have before,
the joy on the bum's face,
and that heart that you were born without
will magically appear.





Submitted on 2004-04-03 14:07:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Thanks for sharing this poem. I haven't had a real good day, and your poem feels very inspiring. And sounds very positive.
| Posted on 2004-04-03 00:00:00 | by Vibrant | [ Reply to This ]
  Immediately I want to know what Damascaean conversion brought about:

'From now on'

And so I need some more poetry from you in front of this, which is worthy and writ well.
I want to know what changed your mind mate.
K
| Posted on 2004-04-03 00:00:00 | by Awkward | [ Reply to This ]
  YOu have summed up in these lines the reason that I write poetry. This is my goal, to find the divinity in the ugly and coarse. To see things as no one else does and bring them a piece of the diamond in the rough. Your message is appreciated, Amy.
Aaron
| Posted on 2004-04-03 00:00:00 | by KrimsonReaper | [ Reply to This ]
  "i'll look for beauty amongst the faithless and sad" is a great line! i like what this poem says. beauty is everywhere if we just look, and not necessarily with our eyes! thank you for sharing this with us!
| Posted on 2004-04-03 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
  And that heart that you were born without
Will magically appear

I think these lines are quite well done and the feeling expressed quite well. Yes, the word usage was simply done but, well stated nonetheless. I enjoyed!
| Posted on 2004-04-03 00:00:00 | by angela~ | [ Reply to This ]


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