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    dots Submission Name: Sexdots
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    Author: C. Flava
    ASL Info:    19/M/ILLINOIS
    Elite Ratio:    4.75 - 87/117/28
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 1105
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 710



    Description:
       I was just a tad bit horny at the time so excuse my "Fuckstration" lol. I might take this down after a little while so read it while you can.


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    dotsSexdots
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    I wanna fuck you
    Like the man in your dreams
    Have you screaming like a bitch
    And yelling crazy things

    I tell that I want to have a taste
    Of your sugary walls,
    Your delightful Milkshake,
    And your cherry falls.

    You may think your ready but you have no clue
    About how many things I can do to you
    I start by doing missionary
    Then hit it from the back
    I'll have you screaming
    "Keep doing it like that"

    If you thought you were ready
    You really don't have a clue
    Because I have 365 more positions
    In my kamasutra book just for you






    Submitted on 2005-04-15 17:44:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Well I think you made everyone laugh at this one.. So yet all real.. You did a good job with this. Just like all your writes you write.. Anyways every write you write, it seems like for some reason its like I wrote something just like or it differant.. but hey I just guess thats just the way it turns out..

    Well anyways you did a good job with this, everything flowed good, and the images were great...
    Sometimes its hard not to think about something like this.. I think we all do.. in ways

    I don't think you should delete this and I think you decided not to, cause I think you wrote this a while ago.. So keep it up here.. People will see view and comment...

    Stephanie
    | Posted on 2005-09-03 00:00:00 | by XxStephyxX04 | [ Reply to This ]
      That's the one brutha, tell it how it is lol. Nothing wrong with a bit of honesty, huh? I thought I would check out some of your stuff, and being a walking hormone as another ES writer once said recently in one of my comments (Inducted_Kitty lol), the title was begging me to have a quick look hahaha.

    I like how you don't dress anything up here. Pure and unadulterated horniness. It's great. It's really what goes through a lot of guy's mind's when they're getting all kinkified with their lady hahaha.

    Nice one!

    Peace,
    Jase
    | Posted on 2005-09-02 00:00:00 | by alteredlife | [ Reply to This ]
      Damn, you tell it like it is, don't you? I loved the second stanza, very... descriptive. It kept a light, humorous tone through out, which adds to the enjoyment of its sexual nature. And the title fits with the very matter of fact nature of the piece well.

    Good write.

    drowning_queen
    | Posted on 2005-05-23 00:00:00 | by drowning_queen | [ Reply to This ]
      though I did notice some typos this still gets a big Hot cha cha from me.

    Now i see why it's on Li Li's favs...Now i'm intrested in what else you can write about...so I'll be stopping by your page.

    dang shame about that age *shakes head* lol
    | Posted on 2005-05-12 00:00:00 | by Brownsdelight | [ Reply to This ]
      Dang! Okay...what's your number and where in Illinois do you live. I ain't that far ya know! *noticing your age* OKKKKAAAYYYY.....nevermind!

    Woo Hoo! Hot! Sounds more like you WERE hittin it from the back while writing it!

    Bend it over daddy and Spank dat azz! LMFAO

    Great write. Loved it!

    LI LI
    | Posted on 2005-05-10 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]
      Great poem, dude. There's 365 positions?! Holy [censored]! I can only think of like 2 hundred! Well, good job... don't delete it. It's too good.
    | Posted on 2005-04-26 00:00:00 | by WD20x2 | [ Reply to This ]
      Love it, sexy. I almost had to light a cigarette and I don't even smoke. Lol, very interesting, I can see your freaky side come out in this one. Well I'll holla at ya later. I just want to let you know that this is going on my favorites.
    -Charlenee
    | Posted on 2005-04-16 00:00:00 | by Charlenee | [ Reply to This ]
      Haha...This was good. You really did get the message across.I agree with kinesthesia that it could be offensive, but you should be able to tell by the title what it is about. I thought it really had a good flow to it. So good imagery too. I don't think you should delete either. It was a very good piece to read, you made me laugh today.

    Much love to ya,
    Mikki
    | Posted on 2005-04-16 00:00:00 | by MiKkI25 | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a good one! Great imagination! Great rhymes! Are fond of rap or hiphop music? Because this poem reminded me of that. Anyway...

    Great imagination in this part,

    I tell that I want to have a taste
    Of your sugary walls,
    Your delightful Milkshake,
    And your cherry falls.

    Then this part really made me laugh

    Then hit it from the back
    I'll have you screaming
    "Keep doing it like that"

    If you thought you were ready
    You really don't have a clue
    Because I have 365 more positions
    In my kamasutra book just for you

    Lol. I never thought there was someone in this site that write like that! This poem made me laugh, been awhile since the last time I had a good laugh. Anyway, good write! This is going to my fave's! hahaha!
    | Posted on 2005-04-15 00:00:00 | by del1rium | [ Reply to This ]
      I wanna [censored] you
    Like the man in your dreams
    Have you screaming like a [censored]
    And yelling crazy things

    That just amde me laugh cause it made me think of someone. I like the second stanza. I think it had a good flow to it. At least you know what you are talking about.
    I dont think you should delete this. I think its pretty good.

    Well keep wriitng. I will try to look for more of your wriitings

    stephanie
    | Posted on 2005-04-15 00:00:00 | by XxStephyxX04 | [ Reply to This ]
      Yea, I laughed.

    It will probably upset some people. You should take poetry more seriously, shame shame.

    Wasn't very poetic or anything like that. Just... horny.

    It was different. Broke... I won't say monotony, but seriousness of my past hour or so.

    ~Akhi~
    | Posted on 2005-04-15 00:00:00 | by Alize | [ Reply to This ]
      This is funny. Most guys(when they are horny)just wank off, but you? nope. You write a poem. Which begs the question... were u wanking off while typing this?
    LeAnna
    | Posted on 2005-06-11 00:00:00 | by RedRoseofBlood | [ Reply to This ]


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