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    dots Submission Name: Something borrowed, SUM THINGdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 133
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 804
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 433



    Description:
       Big FRIDAY SMILEZ 2 ALL ELITISTS <@> C!!!!

    LOVE<PEACE<JOY!!!


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsSomething borrowed, SUM THINGdots
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    In everything IZ opportunity
    4
    PRAISE>>>>>>>
    AWAKENING<<<<<<<<
    BEAUTY<><><><><>
    tolerance &
    ELORATION~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    NOW WON

    ; > }




    Submitted on 2005-04-15 20:46:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Funny how everybody sees everything that is bold and highlighted yet dont have the or that "sticks" out here yet they dont see the:

    tolerance

    TO SEE THE

    opportunity

    In everything
    Have a good one and keep writin'
    | Posted on 2005-04-17 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      This poem friend reads as a praise poem and as HE says all things with breathe will give praise and I am getting to like you simplicity of communicating it is challenging but not intimidating because you are not seeking validation of any sort. ciao `always poetry, cheryl.
    | Posted on 2005-04-16 00:00:00 | by ladyngold | [ Reply to This ]
      Yea. It's kinda weird.
    Somebody's had a little too much fun tonight, eh?
    But yea, I'm glad it's friday too. o.o
    | Posted on 2005-04-15 00:00:00 | by Mieko | [ Reply to This ]
      very experimental. seems more like a journal entry than a piece of poetry, but maybe I just appreciate real poetry more than misspellings, smiley faces, and ???????????????_____________+++++++++++SSSSSSSS>>>>>>>>>>>>es.
    | Posted on 2005-04-15 00:00:00 | by solararia | [ Reply to This ]


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