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    dots Submission Name: AWE SUM `~~~~~~~~~~~~~~dots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 20
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 712
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 113



    Description:
       Dedicated 2 Vincent 4 The Night Cafe ; > "
    Happy Friday & Weekend 2 ALL!!!

    LOVE, PEACE,JOY~~~~~


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    dotsAWE SUM `~~~~~~~~~~~~~~dots
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    Goldenrod
    Existence
    Fragrant
    Redz
    Green ENVY US
    Vision
    ON!!!




    Submitted on 2005-04-15 20:51:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      You have a very simple and elegant way here to give a "shout out" to ol' Vinnie and one of his nice works of art. I read this a few times and was almost lulled to sleep by the words and how they flowed...good job..jf;asdoisg;wg.cgfyn ah

    Ooops, fell asleep on the keyboard there...

    Have a great one and keep smilin'
    | Posted on 2005-04-17 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]


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