This is appealing to me because it's sensual but not overly sexual. It's suggestive, but you still made it obvious that you love her. I applaud you for putting so much into so little words. Great write.
A vivid and sweet image of a seductive "come hither" look. Well done in your word imagery. It reads quite well. I'm starting to appreciate haiku/senyru writings, if done well, such as this lovely poem.
OK, just so other readers understand that I AM a dickhead...I just read your descrition after I'd posted the comment, D'Oh! I should have known what a lovestruck schoolboy would be writing about... Fair dinkum, I'm such a dick... Be Happy, anyway Graeme
Hey, Ben, (must pm you about that) nice! I love guessing games...let's se...Mona Lisa! Go on, tell me it's about your cat or something, burst my bubble. How's the missus? I'll check now for new posts from her Seeya Be Happy Graeme