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    dots Submission Name: For ever and a daydots
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    Author: Raksha
    ASL Info:    16/female
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 75/67/29
    Words: 180
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsFor ever and a daydots
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    You are the beautiful mistake that haunts me.
    Fatal to my heart,
    You’re the light that hath come into my soul of Death Valley.

    Outside and inside you have found both are dreary for me.
    You have now realized what I spoke of.
    Nay, did you believe until you heard the untold souls crying.

    What horror in my mind spoke in curses,
    You heard in time.

    As I rocked back and forth you watched.
    And in every instant you died.

    Unkind stares as your tears did flow,
    Heeded your way in crime.

    Three hundred and sixty-five days a pass,
    But yet nothing has changed.

    I still encumber you as you do I.

    You are the beautiful mistake that haunts me.
    Outside and inside you have found both are dreary for me.
    What horror in my mind spoke in curses,
    As I rocked back and forth you watched.
    Unkind stares as your tears did flow,
    Three hundred and sixty-five days a pass,

    I still encumber you as you do I.





    Submitted on 2005-04-16 17:57:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Well the title is perfect, at first when I read this poem I didn't notice that it was called for ever and a day.
    "You are the beautiful mistake that haunts me."
    I feel the same way about an ex of mine. I still feel like that sometimes, even though now I have a new boyfriend. It's funny how that can be sometimes. Deep and dark.
    "Outside and inside you have found both are dreary for me.
    You have now realized what I spoke of.
    Nay, did you believe until you heard the untold souls crying."
    It's funny when you warn people how they don't believe it until they see it. Good write keep up the good work.
    | Posted on 2005-04-16 00:00:00 | by Charlenee | [ Reply to This ]
      This is really good. The whole thing is written very well and it flows the same way. I hope you keep up the great work on these.
    | Posted on 2005-04-16 00:00:00 | by Akili | [ Reply to This ]



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