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    dots Submission Name: The Cows Don't Knowdots
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    Author: CleoCollier
    ASL Info:    40/F/South
    Elite Ratio:    4.44 - 83/84/26
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Religious
    Total Views: 1774
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    Bytes: 643



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       I'd be interested to see what folks think this is about. Who are the cows? Who are the cows to YOU?? Am I a terrible person?


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    dotsThe Cows Don't Knowdots
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    The cows don't know it's Christmas.
    They're hopelessly homeostatic and witless,
    Force-fed formula of doldrum's dry hubris,
    own the uniqueness of a blow-up doll mistress,
    But saddest of all is
    they don't know it's Christmas!

    The cows don't know it's Christmas,
    collective heads hard & dull as bride's biscuits,
    Confronting life's end they'll be in distress,
    Just one of billions on the cosmic hit list,
    But saddest of all is
    they don't care it's Christmas!




    Submitted on 2005-04-16 20:55:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Yes! wow another brilliant write, and no, you are no horrible person -pats back-

    But its so true, things can live without being controlled by a God.

    Some people might say ( like the highly religous) that the cows are people who are not in thier religion. I just think they are cows. . . who graze in the fields and poop all day. and the sad part is. . .

    they dont know. . . it's Christmas -sobs-

    ^_^ sweet write and. . .i'm really gonna check stuff out from you, I like it! -adds it to fave list-
    | Posted on 2005-10-10 00:00:00 | by Maki | [ Reply to This ]
      Very well written I honestly loved this peice. You showed the inocence of animals. They don't know its Christmas thus they don't know God. But I do suppose this is one way to look at it. "Some" and I stress the word think that animals do realize their is a God just they can't tell us and that is theri torture. I t is all thrown into the wind. Hell, maybe "today" do know that their is a God for they have seen him. And their punishment for their sins is to be placed back on Earth unable to tell us as humans the truth. Hell, who really knows, nobody, this is just some crack pot idea I just made up, but I think your probalbly right because cows don't know it's Christmas and that is surely the sad truth. I love your satiristic tone, it controls this poem nicely but doesn't push it. Very well written, thanks for the read. I'm putting this on my favorites.
    PS- check out my poem "Only Human". I think you will like it becuase it touches on a simular topic, please give it a chance if you have time. Once agian good write, thanks for the read.
    | Posted on 2005-04-16 00:00:00 | by ConScribe | [ Reply to This ]


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