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    dots Submission Name: Wicked Onedots
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    Author: DarkenedSoul
    ASL Info:    30/m/astral dreams
    Elite Ratio:    4.29 - 77/60/17
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 246
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 643



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    dotsWicked Onedots
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    Oh' wicked one, angel fallen from on high
    will you grant but one request;
    please sing to me a lullaby.
    Sing in tones of mournful sorrow,
    sing your words so I may see
    never a tomorrow.
    Oh' wicked one; oh' fallen one
    will you sing for me;
    not a happy tune
    but a haunting melody?
    Oh' wicked one
    cast from Heaven's gate
    should you but sing for me
    then my heart; it would abate.
    Send me off to the deep, dark night
    where I won't have to dream
    of hearing deathly chior
    as damned we will sing.




    Submitted on 2005-04-17 06:13:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      WOW. Invitation for death?
    Pain of the world sooo great that the lullaby of the angel of death will be the only thing to calm the sting of reality?
    This sounds like a cry for torture to come to an end. The death of mourning..
    The birth of something new...
    A haunting melody...I like that phrase..
    I am surprised no one has commented on this.
    As damned we will sing...Sad but much needed..
    Keep writing and I'll keep reading oh talented one with wispers of invitations allowed only in ones mind.
    Love and live Life...
    Peace...
    | Posted on 2005-04-19 00:00:00 | by smalltown | [ Reply to This ]



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