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    dots Submission Name: Fluiditydots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 29
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       Yesterday spent lounging by the American River; swimming in the icy waters & freaking the kayakers out, "NO F@!*ing Way"...and then we swam; conquering the waves in our own way as the kayakers looked on.

    Love, Peace, Joy & Great Nowz 2 All!

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    Though the Rock
    is scientifically
    "IT" cradles the Flower
    "ITs" Freedom
    of Growth;
    not envious
    blessed 2
    part of

    Submitted on 2005-04-17 17:10:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like the contrast between beauty and stability. It provides a vivd picture of true cooperation and codependancy.

    Good on you. I like this one.
    | Posted on 2005-04-26 00:00:00 | by Unicrom | [ Reply to This ]
      Ok, this is the second poem of yours I've read and I enjoy your style...very interpretive :)
    again I like the alternative spellingz ;)
    Good job, I'll be sure to read more of your stuff :)

    | Posted on 2005-04-17 00:00:00 | by Stwcjj | [ Reply to This ]
      Very nicely doen. The rock with the plant growing ouot of it. Life where life cant seemingly seem to exist...yet they grow together and flourish being a part of "it". You have such a way with words too...I liked this.
    | Posted on 2005-04-17 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]

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