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    dots Submission Name: Work Outdots
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    Author: JKPS613
    ASL Info:    17 / f / GA / USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.99 - 388/377/47
    Words: 129
    Class/Type: Prose/Angry
    Total Views: 755
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 743



    Description:
       I know that the description says angry, but the writing itself isn't very angry. However, I was extremely angry when I wrote this (still am) and it contains some advice that an old friend once gave me. I guess I'm about to go take it.


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    Work out. Work out. Remember his advice. Work out. The breathing becomes smoother, more rhythmic. Work out. Forget working out – the anger won’t fade. No, remember his advice. Jog in place, focusing on the music and the words, listening to the beat and breath as your heart begins to match the rhythm. Work out. It’s all about the control. Control over yourself and control over your situation. Control your pace. Control your breathing. Work out. It’s just one disappointment. Feel the hip-hop bass deep inside your soul – but don’t stop. Keep on, keep on. It’s all about the control. Work out. Keep working out. Remember his advice. If you can’t control it, then work out.
    Your breathing melds with the music and the anger is no more.




    Submitted on 2004-01-02 16:33:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      nice imagary, I felt like I was there
    | Posted on 2004-01-02 00:00:00 | by brokenbatman | [ Reply to This ]
      Hmmm, I know exactly how you feel, cos I practise this... working out when I'm mad, anxious or upset. Might have a nice visual effect to lay it out as a poem so it "runs"... otherwise, I love the beat and just what you're saying! Nice.
    | Posted on 2004-01-02 00:00:00 | by hopefloats | [ Reply to This ]
      It's what I do to relieve stress. Give a long job and shower. The heart's pace can't help but get slow and calming and letting out the inside energies will prevent ya from going insanes.
    | Posted on 2004-01-02 00:00:00 | by Webmaster | [ Reply to This ]
      I really don't know where the meaning of the poem is going? Maybe the "mood" might not be right for me. Anyone else know.
    | Posted on 2004-01-02 00:00:00 | by drkpoet | [ Reply to This ]



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