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    dots Submission Name: Blaming Youdots
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    Author: secretdream0
    ASL Info:    21/f/tx
    Elite Ratio:    3.38 - 48/46/22
    Words: 114
    Class/Type: Poetry/What you did
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    dotsBlaming Youdots
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    Sitting here, staring out the window,
    Stealing glances of the cold
    And empty world.

    Memories of us dance through my mind;
    The warmth of your hold
    And the sound of your laughter.

    Sheer pain penetrates my heart
    Where there once was happiness;
    You did this to me.

    You once filled my every thought
    But all that is left is emptiness.
    My protective walls are reinstalled.

    You had helped me break free from myself
    But now Iím imprisoned once more
    In my own vulnerability and shame.

    My self-esteem and self-worth were gone
    The day you called me a dirty whore.
    What I did to deserve this, Iíll never know.




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