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    dots Submission Name: The Garden of Whispersdots
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    Author: Dream shadow
    Elite Ratio:    1.46 - 1/5/5
    Words: 85
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Description:
       This isn't really just about a rose bush. It's kind of about society in general. How dreams are squashed because they're not practicle and how people shrug it off and deal with it. Does anyone remember how they wanted to be a fireman or a ballerina when they were little?


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    dotsThe Garden of Whispersdots
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    Living velvet
    Adorened with thorns
    Whisper to the little ones
    "Today you are born".

    "But in the morning
    It is our fate
    They cut us down
    For their own tastes".

    "We'll live in glass
    And sweetened water
    There in the window
    Dies my own daughter".

    "They'll breathe 'How pretty'
    As we start to decay
    But us being roses
    Have nothing to say".

    "so at the dawn
    Stand proud, don't cry
    It is our duty
    We're born to die".




    Submitted on 2005-04-18 16:33:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is absolutely beautiful!
    You are an awesome writer my friend, welcome to EliteSkills and thanx for such poetic beauty! I hope to get to read more of your work soon.
    | Posted on 2005-04-18 00:00:00 | by psycho_1 | [ Reply to This ]

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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