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    dots Submission Name: SiMpLy Medots
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    Author: punkgrl999
    ASL Info:    15/f/usa
    Elite Ratio:    2.53 - 8/13/4
    Words: 33
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       i wrote this like 3 years ago. its not very good. i wrote it when i was a so called "budding poet" so i rly didnt know much. but tell me wut u think


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    dotsSiMpLy Medots
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    Whe you people see me
    You see right through
    I can't be someone you want me to be
    So please stop judging me
    And wait to see
    That I am sImPlY mE.




    Submitted on 2005-04-18 16:46:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This may be short but it says a lot, and I can totally understand what you are saying here. Maybe one day people will stop being so shallow and see you for who you really are!
    | Posted on 2005-04-18 00:00:00 | by psycho_1 | [ Reply to This ]
      wow theres so much stuff about that topic but u shortend it to six lines but i also know what your talking about i can really realate to it
    | Posted on 2005-04-18 00:00:00 | by s33d | [ Reply to This ]
      This was actually quite interesting. It's a cliché topic BUT you rounded it up in six lines. Six lines was enough to express what a lot of teenage rock bands try to express with entire albums. I mean no offence when I say it is cliché. Poetry is such a commonly used tool for expression that it is extremely hard to be original, but with this poem, you effectively summarized a feeling and succeeded where other poets have failed.
    | Posted on 2005-04-18 00:00:00 | by Cindergarden1 | [ Reply to This ]


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