Chastity-Fornication
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Okay, hmmm... not a kind of title you hear everyday?
Especially in the same sentence. Well, I just know that we have sex-ed, (I call it antisex-ed cuz it's from te Catholic perspective, heheh)
So I thought it would be a good dea to write about it, especially since I haven't written in a few weeks. . .
Especially in the same sentence. Well, I just know that we have sex-ed, (I call it antisex-ed cuz it's from te Catholic perspective, heheh)
So I thought it would be a good dea to write about it, especially since I haven't written in a few weeks. . .
Chastity-Fornication
Fornication is not love it's not a way of life To sleep around with everyone 'Most every single night It's a different kind of thing to hear A word so unclear to us To hear from so many point of views I get lost so much Do you? I hear the passion stories Masturbation, Procreation Fornication, Revelation They may not sound alike But they run deep in similarities In one way or another It sounds like a type of love To someone, somewhere It mocks love From every angle It leaves us in despair To love someone With all your heart Doesn't seem to hard, when you think about it But to really do so It's unbelievable To love someone Takes time and effort Personally I think it is something That takes time to learn Over a series of years With the person you married The person you spend every moment with Of every day It doesn't mean always Physically But mentally as well I hope we see That love is not to be mocked But if we take on chastity until marriage Perhaps, there would be a difference In our world...? |
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| You know me... I was drawn to this like a magnet. Before i even saw the title, i was thinking to myself "Ooh. Amy is writing about dirty stuff again." Na, seriously, it would be a very different world... A world with: A: 13 year olds getting married B: A bunch of people humping everything in site, (Kinda like the taco bell dog on viagra.) (I just realized how funny it would be to see somebody doing that.) C: A world with damn near no single people. D: The gay people would win about the gay "Right" to marry. E: Subsequently, Sanfrancisco would not be visitable at all, as apposed to 50% unvisitable. F: they would have illegal, underground fornication booths, and people could get castrated for having intercourse outside of marriage, unless they bribe the Pope or somebody... I can see that right now... Guy: Could i have sex? The Pope Or Somebody: That'll be $.500.00. As you can see, the world would suck. Unless i'm leaving something out... And, as you can see, I am bored and really need to write something... (I havent in nearly a week.) | Posted on 2005-04-20 00:00:00 | by WD20x2 | [ Reply to This ] | love, being what it is, often intermingles with the notion of infatuation and lust in a way so abstract that it is hard to proclaim it as a separate entity. but it is. | marriage... is a certification of two people who are in love. but, as much as the catholic church makes it seem... it is not permanent because the true foundation of marriage is love. and... i think it is possible for one to fall out of love. now with all due respect... i think fornication is a way of life... somewhat dangerous minus the rubber but still... it is a way of life. to live without attachments is a choice that every human being can make because it is their right... as it is the right of every other living thing to commit solely to one's self. fornication is not exactly a mockery of love because sex doesn't necessarily have to revolve around the notion of love. personally... i accept sex before marriage as-long as the people doing it are well aware with the pros and cons of the act. going for an analogy... no matter how the system fabricates it... i still think knowledge is more important than a diploma. as for your theory in the last stanza... i agree. of course the world will be a better place since premarital sex is a powerful contributor to the detriments of a country... but the main reason why it is detrimental is not because people are not married... it is because people are not responsible enough to consider the positive and negative effects of sex. still... i am... in a way... proud of your attempt... considering your age. keep writing.  | Posted on 2005-04-18 00:00:00 | by ANGELO | [ Reply to This ] | i agree with it in some parts but not in others... and only partially in some... but it makes alot of since one of the parts i do not agree completely with is "Fornication is not love | it's not a way of life To sleep around with everyone 'Most every single night" i agree with it in the way that people should not sleep around... but i disagree in the way that they can not have sex if they only have one partner... and they love eachother and what not... but other than the few places i disagree it is a good poem | Posted on 2005-04-18 00:00:00 | by Esophagus1 | [ Reply to This ] | |
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