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    dots Submission Name: Tiffarina BallarinaZ ; > }dots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 28
    Class/Type: Prose/Friendship
    Total Views: 688
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 351



    Description:
       A venting day; thank u 2 my bestest buddy Hyproglo, DAVE, 4 the joy of having someone totally kool 2 come home 2 and make the best of the REST of the DAY?NIGHT!!! I forgot which was which 4 the river'z wavyz look as glistening in the sun as the moon!


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    dotsTiffarina BallarinaZ ; > }dots
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    "i" AM
    Tifferina BallerinaZ
    shoez of
    golden
    dreamz
    "i" AM
    Tiffarina BallerinaZ
    wingz of
    bronzed
    smilez
    "i" AM
    Tiffarina BallerianZ
    soul giliding
    yonder
    shorez ; > {}!!!!!!!!!!!!!&&&&&&#########**




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      Has one ever been so full of life.
    Ever free and eyes of fire.

    Who holds the passions of their desire so close to their hearts.

    Swing in a sea of hear feld desires.
    Hopefly some day all your dreams will come true.

    Cha ~

    Ps. like the peice even if you do have wings of bronze and shoes of gold.

    Iss one drunk from the boozum of life?
    Or are you simply giddy about what life has to offer.
    Crazy, about life even?

    I guess I'll never know.
    any ways keep up the good work I like this one.
    | Posted on 2005-05-08 00:00:00 | by Unicrom | [ Reply to This ]
      Tiff this poem reads as if you are just blowed out your mind on LIFE and that is the best high ever presented to mankind with only good after effects lol you are so uniquely you with these poems and I think everyone should read at least one a day to knock the munduness out of their minds lol~ excellect poem Tiff, always love Cheryl.
    | Posted on 2005-04-20 00:00:00 | by ladyngold | [ Reply to This ]
      Lol, I like this a lot. It almost sounds like a the title of a bedtimes story you could read to your daughter :) Very nice work :)

    Stw
    | Posted on 2005-04-19 00:00:00 | by Stwcjj | [ Reply to This ]
      If one doesn't feel in a lighter mood after reading this, I just don't know about them..lol.
    This was lighthearted and fun to read.
    A joyous declaration of self.

    Just lovely!

    ~Sandra
    | Posted on 2005-04-19 00:00:00 | by Intricate1 | [ Reply to This ]
      I thought this was fun, upbeat joyous write, and thoroughly enjoyed it.
    I would cut the (; > {}!&&&&&&#########**) off at the end though. or put it as a decoration under the last line.

    My grandaughter Katy has a thing about ballerinas, so I will read this to her first thing tomorrow! She will love it too.
    Silver
    | Posted on 2005-04-19 00:00:00 | by Silverdog | [ Reply to This ]
      C reative and talented,
    R arely depressed.
    A lways full of love.
    Z zzzz ! (sorry it's late, drifted off!)
    Y ou are Tifferina Ballerina! Be Happy!
    | Posted on 2005-04-19 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]
      this is such an uplifting and self-confident write! i love it. you are always so joyful and full of love. it's nice to see that around here where there often seems to be too much doom and gloom.

    ~Shalom
    | Posted on 2005-04-18 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
      You are...that you are...Tiffarina Ballarina...golden light I, forever see ya...Guided by the stars that hold ya...say my name and there is you...say your name and thus is me...floating on to what should be...

    At least, thats what I get from your eloquent words. Thanks for you 2...and then some...and beyond that... { } [ ] ...infinate
    | Posted on 2005-04-18 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]


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