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    dots Submission Name: Memoriesdots

    Author: ThatWasOnceMe
    ASL Info:    30/F/NC
    Elite Ratio:    3.71 - 197/194/53
    Words: 185
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
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       This poem is for my mother who passed away at the tender age of 29. This was when I was the young age of 7. i dont have many memories ut what I do I will hold close to me forever. I hope you like this poem.

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    Memories I have of you are so faint
    and few.
    Nevertheless those faint memories I
    have of you,
    I hold so close and dear in my heart .
    Even though they are fragments and
    I often dream I knew you a little more ,
    So I can have more of you I could
    adore .
    I was saddened when you went on
    your way.
    I broke down and prayed for you to
    The Lord heard my outcry and told
    me why.
    I still didn't want it to be your season
    to fly
    Your are my mother and I long for
    you still.
    Although with time the pain will never
    I reflect on you often and smile when
    I do.
    You are here with me forevermore
    just me and you.
    All I do is close my eyes and speak
    your name,
    The Lord delivers you to me frame by
    Even if it's within my dreams or my
    The Lord will forevermore deliver you

    Submitted on 2005-04-19 09:25:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I'm so sorry for the loss of your mother. Just cherish those memories. She will always be with you at heart. This was a great poem. I wouldn't change a thing about it. I'm sure you mom is proud of you for the great wonderful woman you have grown into. Always keep you head up high...

    Much love to ya,
    | Posted on 2005-04-21 00:00:00 | by MiKkI25 | [ Reply to This ]
      *Hug* This is a really sweet poem. I'm sure she's enjoying it where ever she is. I'm sorry that this had to happen to you.
    | Posted on 2005-04-19 00:00:00 | by painofthanatos | [ Reply to This ]

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