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I greet you with my *Welcome*
As you smear the shit from
Your soul all over me
I try and smile
My surface is still strong
It just doesn't look as
And in walks everyone else
I'm not really important
I'm just here to keep
Your insides looking
I look up admiringly
I'll be strong enough
To be the handle
And one day
I'll be able
To lock you Out.
| creative play on an old cliché. you took it, molded it, and made it your own quite well. I particularly liked the bit about locking out those who have trampled you over the years. an inspiring piece||| Posted on 2005-05-15 00:00:00 | by cainboy | [ Reply to This ] || awkward, this is a lot like my life. i say this because i am fat, in band, and i am really geeky. and we all know where geeks are in society, lowest part of the food/popualtriy chain. So yeah you can say i eel this way a lot. THNX |
|| Posted on 2005-05-05 00:00:00 | by Namlooc20 | [ Reply to This ] || Yeah all the stuff Six and D&D and the rest have said ...I know how this feels for sure ...Usually its the one person ...Who re-walks on me ...I must I must go check out your other stuff...this was deliciously depressing ..And i like that ! :D Blessed Be||| Posted on 2005-04-26 00:00:00 | by Krysti | [ Reply to This ] || Never thought I'd read a poem about a door mat and like it.|
You should correct the maybe instead of mabe though.
Layer one: plain door mat.
Layer two: a deep meaning referring to people who make our life easier and who we don't notice or even mistreat at times.
Nothing to say about the form it just sticks together.
|| Posted on 2005-04-26 00:00:00 | by babyblue002 | [ Reply to This ] || oooo im so honored that you created this because you were inspired by me. hurray! *shivers* i can't find anything to [censored] about because as i read it a second time, it makes even more sense and is even better to me. woo! nice!|
|| Posted on 2005-04-20 00:00:00 | by sudie | [ Reply to This ] || *opens door and looks at door mat*|
OH YOU POOR THING...I HAD NO IDEA!
This was interesting. There are many ways you could interpret this. That adds to the piece even more.
|| Posted on 2005-04-19 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ] || D&D beat me too you! That tramp! (oh well- I still heart her) But, she said all the stuff I was going to say... Damn- not I’d just look lyke a copycatt... I need to think of new stuff... Maybe... how I missed you on here as of late and I’m glad to be reading your stuff and ... ...everything she said... Peace, love and crappy days- ~#6-||| Posted on 2005-04-19 00:00:00 | by Six_Grey | [ Reply to This ] || *sigh* oh, how i can relate...this is a wonderfully sad little piece. this poem speaks volumes to me; it's as if you have painted my soul into a picture of words. great job, dearie. i think that since you have, once again, impressed me so, i shall add you to my submission stalk list. great write. keep it up, and i promise to keep reading!|
hugs and fingerlickings,
|| Posted on 2005-04-19 00:00:00 | by dark_and_dreary | [ Reply to This ] |