that's really good, it gave me something to think about...All the hate today, i sat down and wrote a poem the other day about the issues today, and I haven't posted it yet still in editing stage...anyway, great write, it gave me soemthing to think about.
<@> just HATE that this is what people have come 2 in society and as your piece alludes 2; WHAT DA HECK IZ GOIN ON UP IN HERE?? I remeber being a child, heck <!> still am "1", & "ITZ" not about being scared...still "i" don't lock my doorz nor cower in fear & "i've" been 'round the world & back again...never A SCARED! I appreciate you taking the challenge & as always challenger & challengee r way more up 2 par! Love, Peace, Joy & continued blessings 2 you and your family! LOVE, Live, LAUGH!
Sometimes I feel like ranting about these sorts of problems too. Hate always comes from a love for something else. People hate murderers becuase they love life. I like what you did with this. It really makes the reader think.
This is so awesome. I liek it so much. Like munchie said unique. I really never read anthing liek this. I like the last stanza the best. It puts it all together. Yah know what all of this is true though and it is really sad to see all of this going on. I aplade you for writting something like this. Wonderful!!!
This was unique. But coming from you...expected. This was awesome. I would send this for real. Just somewhere in there you need to mention something about the gas prices...it would be cheaper to fill the tank with Hennesee. LMFAO
Dave, please accept this golden goblet as your trophy for winning the coveted Wewak Challenge Award. Simply awesome, I never would have thought of a kid's viewpoint! I AM impressed Now, return to your constant cheezy love-struck happy stuff...LOL Graeme