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    dots Submission Name: Antithesisdots
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    Author: Dipsomniac
    Elite Ratio:    3.47 - 59/70/18
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Description:
       This is about everything, and it's about nothing.


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    dotsAntithesisdots
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    Solitary confinement is the order
    And alone is a crowd
    Darkness is the decree
    And light casts shadows
    Infect the sickness
    Corrupt the immoral
    Poison the arsenic
    Sadden the depression
    Up with the mountains
    Down with the valleys
    Stretch out the universe
    Shrink the atoms
    Silence the mute
    Microphone the screams
    Open the gates
    Shut the dungeons
    Free the citizens
    Jail the prisoners
    Resurrect the living
    Kill the dead
    Bless the holy
    Curse the damned
    Copy the twins
    Halve the singles
    Start the beginning
    And finish the end.




    Submitted on 2005-04-19 18:37:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is very... interesting to say the least. Somehow, I found myself enthralled in the mystery surrounding this piece. I love the description you gave it also.. "This is about everything, and it's about nothing." And the title of the piece is very apt as well. You really hit the nail on the head with this one. Bien. Bien.

    Looking forward,
    Bijou
    | Posted on 2005-04-19 00:00:00 | by Bijou de Mort | [ Reply to This ]


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