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    dots Submission Name: Maui in Minddots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 38
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 561
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 309



    Description:
       It's been a stressful couple of days at work as my Microsoft Word is possessed and "i" have a study to put together.

    Rather than get pissed & pissy "i" just have been dressing in my Maui clothes, putting flowers in my hair and pretending that everything associated with work is really a great vacation.

    Positively Fabulous the Power of the Mind!
    Great day 2 All! Love, Peace, Joy!!!


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    dotsMaui in Minddots
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    <@> awoke
    to a trip
    of the most
    colorful kind..
    Traveled nowhere
    on a plane
    in mind...
    Relaxing vacation
    true peace
    "i" find....
    Floating on
    the wavez
    of Maui
    in my
    MIND : > }





    Submitted on 2005-04-20 15:00:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Perhaps you shoud be writing cards to help sheer people up.

    This poem not only flows well but gives all of us (well at least me) the immage of a gal that is dressed up to go on a vacation of the min.

    Microsoft products can only be evil to the prosoperous. Always back you wrings up on email and send them to yourself. then burn them once you have enough to put on disk.
    | Posted on 2005-05-08 00:00:00 | by Unicrom | [ Reply to This ]
      And there were flowers in her haaaiiiiirrrrrrrr...and she was happy here or therrrrrrrrre...and the broo-haa-haa was shaaaaarrrrrrred...

    Sorry, just got that visual from this Tiffarina Ballarina. Such an inspiration you are...and it comes so naturally...Thanks for an uplifting piece as always.

    And when you start to feelin' well, ya feel, ya feel swell...and when you start to rhyme, well, you rhyme, you rhyme well...Beasties!

    Have a great one and keep rhymin'
    DAVE
    | Posted on 2005-04-20 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      What a great poem :) If I dressed in Maui clothes at work, people would probably throw canned goods at my head:P (oh wait they already do! :P) As far Microsoft Word being possessed, try using the Mystic SledgeHammer. It Works wonders :)

    Stw
    | Posted on 2005-04-20 00:00:00 | by Stwcjj | [ Reply to This ]
      what a great way to liven up your day! you are always so positive and hopeful in your writes. won't let a bad day get you down. now let's see you do the hula!!
    | Posted on 2005-04-20 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
      Tiff, if you were paid to make people smile, you'd be able to buy Gatesey out and make some software that friggin' WORKS! Hey, good Pun!
    now come over here and try this grass skirt on...
    Be Happy <@>
    Graeme
    | Posted on 2005-04-20 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]


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