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A Section 8 bitch


Author: SmoothePapa
ASL Info:    24/m/FL
Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 55 /90 /16
Words: 181
Class/Type: Rant /Angry
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This poem is about hoes who stay in public housing thinking they the shit. So I had to put these hoes in they place. basicly I just had a little fun.


A Section 8 bitch



I don't mean to be rude,
but I've had enough of this shit.
Enough of the stuckup hoe
known as the section 8 bitch.
She walks proud,
always in style
with a smile on her face.
She drives a brand new Mercedes Benz
into an apartment parking space.
Sure...that's great,
or yet pathetic since
i'm the one who pays her bills.
I'm the one who gives
her seven worthless children ass a meal.
So let's be real...
you got a deal...
Paying one dollar a fucking month.
While the rest of us working people
see our paychecks get death touched.
You easy slut,
weeve wearing mutt,
and unprosperous citizen.
If I was God..
I'd erase your part,
and make sure ..
you were'nt a kid again.
Twin of Gilligan..
Wife of Bob Hope.
You go both ways
just like your folks..
Whore your grandma's only thirty-nine,
but has had..
seven different strokes.
This shit's a joke
let me clear the smoke
let me leave this hoe alone.
You just remember..
You little slither..
What you have..
I bought, and I own.




Submitted on 2005-04-20 19:26:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  well if the apple dont fall far from the tree! he he he...looks like you are ready to stir the waters much like your younger bro!

well the shock value is pretty high on this one, and my girls, Li Li, Tina, and tayla all pretty much hit on everything that i would say really.

so...ummmmm yeah...i agree and disagree, but there ya go! :P
-Nikki
| Posted on 2005-04-22 00:00:00 | by stolie77 | [ Reply to This ]
  This is a great poem. Although I side with Li Li it isn't the kids fault. It is the parents fault. They can't take care of theirself. Other than that I think this was wonderful. I wouldn't change anything other than when you blame the kiddy's. I have to try and get reading your other stuff.

Much love to ya,

Mikki**
| Posted on 2005-04-22 00:00:00 | by MiKkI25 | [ Reply to This ]
  Damn... Sensing some hostility. I gotta go with T and Li Li on this one, leave the kids out of it (cuz T will beat your ass, trust me). Other than that, I can feel where you're comin from. Hmm, a Benz and an apartment... Kinda contradictory if you think about it...
| Posted on 2005-04-21 00:00:00 | by Phoenix2004 | [ Reply to This ]
  I can see the frustration. It's hard working a 9-5 trying to get ahead when a good chunk goes off to good ol uncle sam.

I just had to disagree with this write however, mostly because you had to throw in that part about "her seven worthless children" children are innocent gifts from God no matter what circumstances they are brought into they are NEVER worthless.
| Posted on 2005-04-21 00:00:00 | by Brownsdelight | [ Reply to This ]
  Well, I have my agreements on this and my disagreement.

Yes, I hate those people that keep spitting out children and don't work nor properly take care of their shorties. They look pimp and their kids look broke. That is a sick thing.

My disagreement, it's not the childs fault. It's not this person's families fault. (unless they are the same way)

The overall view of this. I can feel your rage and pain...yet at the same time...you can't blame the children.

Keep it up and I'll stay committed to reading.

Li Li
| Posted on 2005-04-21 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]
  For those who are disabled, excuse us.
hey I understand your feelings. it's not only the section 8 people, but the hmong refugees, vietnam, boat people that light my fuse. lucky for them my fuse s extra longso they suffer more.
I simply go up to one of em and say hey if you can't show any respect, bag your bags and get outta here.
nice ho poem.
| Posted on 2005-04-20 00:00:00 | by hotrodruss | [ Reply to This ]


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