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    dots Submission Name: Case 33: Tooth Faeriedots
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    Author: Skinwalker
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       A detective's account of horrible murders. The killer is still out there. Be careful.


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    dotsCase 33: Tooth Faeriedots
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    Case 33: The Tooth Faerie

    Date: 4/12/05
    Location: Greensboro, North Carolina
    I am Det. Daniel Jones. I have been assigned the horrible job of recording the mysterious murders that occured over the past months. The following is the recorded events as described to me by the officers that worked this case.

    Date:2/07/05
    Location: Greensboro, North Carolina. The Aarmstrong residence. The exact address (as well as the rest) are withheld for personal safety.
    The body of Billy Aarmstrong was found 12 miles past his house on the side of the road. He was apparently spirited away in the cover of darkness. His parents were quoted as saying, "We let him go outside to play. We thought nothing about it being dark. We could never imagine such a thing like this could happen...". Billy was killed by massive bodily damage that occurred from brutal beatings. He was found with a shattered sternum caused from the severe bludgening. His fingers on his left hand were broken after he was murdered. His canine teeth were also removed. Evidence was found in the form of hair. The owner of the hair is yet to be found. Billy was 6 years old.

    Date:2/17/05
    Location: Greensboro, North Carolina. The Rose residence.
    The body of Cathrine Rose was found at the bottom of the hollow. She died from massive brain trauma caused by a rock. Her cranium was split. Her incisor teeth were removed. Police officials believe this to be a calling card of a sick individual. Her parents were not willing to provide input about the death. Evidence was found in the form of fingerprints. The killer apparently has tried to burn off his fingerprints because only half of the fingerprints were found. The owner of the fingerprints and hair is yet to be found. Cathrine was 12 years old.

    Date:2/28/05
    Location: Greensboro, North Carolina. The Hale residence.
    The body of Samuel Hale was found in the woods. His parents were quoted as saying, "Samuel was angry and had run away. We thought he had just gone to a friend's house". His body had already began to decay. His body, discovered by two hikers, was found in the woods behind his parents' house. His throat was sliced by a sharpened bone that was found at the murder site. His shirt was ripped and stuffed in his mouth and throat to silence his screaming and blood loss. He died slowly and painfully. His wisdom teeth were missing. Evidence was found in his hands in the form of hair ripped from the assailant and from the bone in the form of fingerprints. A match between the evidence and the killer is believed to be found. Samuel was 19 years old.

    Date:3/04/05
    Location: Greensboro, North Carolina. Bennett residence.
    The evidence was found to match a Harry Bennett, 42. A search warrant was gained on 3/03/05. An inspection was led by fellow officers and myself. Harry Bennett was not at home. The officers and myself had believed that he had fled before we could find his house. His front door was wide open. We approached cautiously. We heard a constant dripping sound as we entered the living room. The room appeared to be a normal room. We moved into the kitchen, where we found bottles upon bottles of dark, orange urine. We found the bottles in the refridgerator and on the floors and in the cabinets. We moved into his bathroom. The sink was covered in grime and his toilet remained unflushed and overflowing with fecal matter. There was a crack in the wall. The crack led away from the mirror. I removed the mirror and found a hidden compartment. The compartment was hiding a small, light-blue box. Inside the box was the teeth of children. MANY more than the ones we found missing in the cadavers of the children. We had all the evidence we needed for the arrest warrant.

    Date:3/18/05
    Location: Greensboro, North Carolina.
    The search for Harry Bennett has, at this time, been going on for 14 days now. He had not been found at this time.

    Date:3/29/05
    Location: Greensboro, North Carolina. The Webster Woods.
    The body of Harry Bennett was found in Webster Woods. He had been apparantly decaying for at least a month now. His teeth and bottom jaw were removed by sheer physical force. His left hand and chunks of his hair had been removed. This led to further investigation on the past months. A hypothesis has been formed. The killer had killed Harry Bennett and had been living in his house. Harry was an eccentric person and a social hermit. No one had bothered to talk to him and he never left his house. This is probably why no one had noticed that some one else had been living in his house. Upon closer inspection of the teeth with a UV light, semen had been found. The killer had ejaculated onto the teeth. A sample of the semen has been sent to be inspected.

    Date:4/12/05
    Location: Greensboro, North Carolina.
    The inspection of the semen has shown no leads. The semen is not human. It is more closely related to a wolf's than a human's. The scientists are baffled. We at the station are baffled as well. The killer has yet to be found. Harry Bennett's teeth are yet to be found. I have found some ancient Mayan text reprints that detail a creature that came and killed bad, little children. A bogeyman. I have found that it loved little children's teeth. I am going to research this more.





    Date:4/19/05
    Location: Greensboro, North Carolina.
    Det. Daniel Jones's body was found in his house. He was found in his chair in the living room. Every light in his house was busted. A flashlight was found in his lap. It was left on and the batteries had died. He died due to a self-inflicted bullet wound to his head. He had his pistol in his hand. His teeth were assumed to have been blown from his head due to the force imparted by the gun. He had stuck the gun barrel under his jaw and shot upwards. Across the room from him was a message. The message was written in Det. Jones's blood. It read, "If you look for the shadows, the shadows will look for you and you cannot escape". The other officers believed he had killed Mr. Bennett and killed himself out of guilt. I believe that they were covering something up. Det. Jones had been nervous and scared for the past 3 days. He had killed himself do to fear. Fear of what? I am going to pick up from where he had left off. I am determined to find the killer...the thing that scared Det. Jones.
    Deputy Charles Holder.




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      holy [censored] u have me completely on end. still. sheesh this was the bomb. very good. just by passages u had me completely dumbfounded. sooo good. sooo cool. sooooooooo scary in every since of the word. i am not the one scared of the dark, im the one thats scared of whats IN the dark. ur good. ~cat~
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