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    dots Submission Name: tHE WAY ~ Maui 101dots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 39
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 584
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 316



    Description:
       Maui
    z

    just such an inspiRATIONAL STATE OF MIND ; > }

    BEAUTY IZ ALL THAT "1" IMAGINEZ!

    Love, Peace, Joy!!!
    epiph the tiff, Tiffarina Ballerina & Hula Chick Extrodinaire (or as my SON would say, "ESSSQQQUUIISSSIT TTEEE"!


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    dotstHE WAY ~ Maui 101dots
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    <@> found
    tHE WAY
    o
    o
    k just a picture;
    turquoise, white
    black...
    2 remind me
    tHE sunz rayz
    o
    u
    c
    h
    ocean shorez
    & old
    treez ; > }
    NURTUR"i"NG
    LOVE
    STILL
    o?




    Submitted on 2005-04-21 00:58:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Maui zaui! Mental pictures work well dont they. I was thinking about tropical forests and grass skirts and little drinks with umbrellas in them, reggae music...and our good friend Towlie! *I'm so f*ucked up right now I dont know whats going on*

    have a great one and keep smilin'
    BBQ!
    | Posted on 2005-04-22 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      I've been to Maui, and all I got was this lousy T-Shirt!
    Tiff, you are incredible with your wordplay, and infectiously crazy, but I've told you that, haven't I? Or was that Eric, my yellow moose? Or Ronald, my talking dandelion? I'm sure I told something!
    Now...concentrate...who was it?...
    | Posted on 2005-04-21 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]
      You must really like maui, this is the second one of yours I have read about it. Makes me realize how glad I am that I dont have a job that is so bad I have to mentally be somewhere else. I like how you took a picture and touched the ocean shores though, that was a nice effect.
    | Posted on 2005-04-21 00:00:00 | by lottanada | [ Reply to This ]
      Another excellent poem :)...(love the picture :))...The only problem is that all these poems about Hawaii and Maui and all that are gonna make me want to go on vacation :P...

    keep writing

    Stw
    | Posted on 2005-04-21 00:00:00 | by Stwcjj | [ Reply to This ]


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