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    dots Submission Name: A student's problemdots
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    Author: Trufflepiggy
    ASL Info:    30something/Fe/USA
    Elite Ratio:    6.13 - 78/59/18
    Words: 30
    Class/Type: Limerick/Serious
    Total Views: 1476
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    Bytes: 187



    Description:
       Now this WOULD be a cute, funnly limerick to me, except for the fact that it mirrors me exactly. I have always detested math. I will forever detest math. It will always be my arch nemesis. Studies by teachers show I function at a child's level with it. Personally, I'd like to meet this Jane character, than we could gripe and groan about it together!


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    dotsA student's problemdots
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    There once was a student named Jane
    Who considered her math text a pain
    She studied and studied
    With groups of her buddies, but
    Her efforts were always in vain




    Submitted on 2005-04-21 10:12:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I actually liked math... until I hit high school and went... algebra? And this helps in what way? Calculus? Statistics? Like I care! Anyways, yea... I know what you mean hahahaha. Good limerick.

    Jase
    | Posted on 2005-10-10 00:00:00 | by alteredlife | [ Reply to This ]
      Yeh, Jane was not studying with her buddies, I know what Jane was up too. One plus one equals fun. I quite like maths. So on the limerick front, I think its quite difficult to make a good Limerick. This is a little to simple for me, it would be good on the back of a milk carton or something.. but I suppose Limericks aren't supposed to be works of art are they? Love n small things.. Myth xx
    | Posted on 2005-06-30 00:00:00 | by popular_myth | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow- apparently eliteskills.com is just made up of traumatized math haters. I try and I try- that poem is like my life story. I got a ten on a precalc quiz this year. A 10! Out of 100! Boy, that was a low point. heheh.
    As some poet once said, how important is it to find the square root of mount everest, anyway? (okay... that poet was me. so shoot me.)
    And it's a cute poem, too! Even though I kind of think the word 'but' was a bit of a rhyming roadblock. However, you need it in there or else the poem wouldn't make sense...
    but overall, woho! good job!
    (and the above statement is officially known as: a dreadful tangent.)
    | Posted on 2005-04-26 00:00:00 | by Kristen Gudsnuk | [ Reply to This ]
      haha I am sure we all feel that way when it comes to math. It is definitely my most hated subject, and probably most other's also. Very short and simple, good limerick

    Later
    | Posted on 2005-04-21 00:00:00 | by xeternalshadowx | [ Reply to This ]
      YAY! I really do like this limerick, math is really like the language of Satan I do believe. I just got out of math... geometry... the underworld... you know. Yes, very good and very true.
    -Secret
    | Posted on 2005-04-21 00:00:00 | by secret moon | [ Reply to This ]
      are you talking about me...even though my name is not jane???...i couldn't stand math in high school. anyways, this is a nice limerick. simple and written just like a limerick should be.
    | Posted on 2005-04-21 00:00:00 | by Rukiya Faizah | [ Reply to This ]


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