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    dots Submission Name: endless gamedots
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    Author: k kin
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 56/51/12
    Words: 183
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
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    song.....song about change...about becoming something else...about this endless game of metamorphosis.


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    dotsendless gamedots
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    look at the sky
    sky looks so cold
    night is young
    but the stars are old
    and in that night
    a boy i once knew
    became the man i was never to be

    aah the twists and turns
    the wind it blows and the pages turns
    oooh this endless game
    riding on clouds that never had a name

    if i had some money
    all the money in the world
    i'd buy some silver
    leave out the gold
    cause silver reminds me
    of the stars in the sky
    and makes a promise to never tell a lie

    aah the twists and turns
    the wind it blows and the pages turns
    oooh this endless game
    riding on clouds that never had a name


    into the dark corridors of my mind
    i will travel
    i will find my way
    on roads that i have never been

    And then a whisper
    a whisper so loud
    breaks the silence
    of that heavenly crowd
    you can put different pictures
    in the same picture frame
    but the man
    the man remains the same.




    Submitted on 2005-04-22 03:36:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this poem did not reach me for some kind of reason, im guessing its because im a hopeless romantic,
    but if it works for you i guess its good
    | Posted on 2005-04-22 00:00:00 | by Angel McCalmon | [ Reply to This ]
      I really like this poem. I can't relate to it but it really interested me. I like how u said that u would buy the silver and leave out the gold. This poem was awsome. I am thinking of adding it to my favorites list! well goodluck!byez
    | Posted on 2005-04-22 00:00:00 | by Evie | [ Reply to This ]


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