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    dots Submission Name: Plansdots
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    Author: secretdream0
    ASL Info:    21/f/tx
    Elite Ratio:    3.38 - 48/46/22
    Words: 251
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsPlansdots
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    tonight don't make any plans
    that means NO weed
    cuz i want you to enjoy it when i take you in my hands
    and satisfy your every need.

    i'll suck and lick from your base to your tip,
    you'll writhe and moan
    as i hold you between my lips.
    and i'll nibble a little just to hear you groan.

    i want you to explode in my mouth,
    feel you quiver and shake,
    while i'm there,down south,
    it'll be too much for you to take.

    while your still on your back,
    i try to contain myself but it's tough,
    cuz i'm waiting for you to attack;
    i want it hard and rough.

    i want you to kiss me hard, pull my hair,
    peel off my clothes,
    where they land no one cares,
    i want you to lick every inch of me from my head to my toes.

    i want to feel your teeth on me,
    especially on my breast,
    so hard my eyes glaze and i can't see,
    that's how i like it best.

    and if i'm feeling up to it,
    we'll try something new.
    maybe i'll let you run your tongue over my clit,
    in and around me too.

    and when your done,
    i'll lick your mouth clean.
    wasn't that fun?
    but wait, there's more to be seen.

    i'll give you a kiss,
    and climb back on top....
    if you come tonght i'll fulfill your every wish
    and i promise i won't stop.




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