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    dots Submission Name: Poopiesdots
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    Author: Skinwalker
    Elite Ratio:    2.62 - 36/57/28
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
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    Description:
       I was bored and sleepy and decided to be wierd. Enjoy.


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    dotsPoopiesdots
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    Poopies are fun.
    You can smell the poo
    and read until you are done.
    You can even fling it too.

    It sticks to paper
    it sticks to walls.
    It isn't cocoa flavored
    but it can be rolled into balls.

    It is brown but can be green.
    It can even have a red sheen.

    One question I have to ask as
    it swirls down and down fast
    into a deep, deep dark pit...
    Why are you reading a poem about shit?




    Submitted on 2005-04-23 23:05:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Haha. This is one of the top comedy writes on here that I've ever seen. (other than mine, of course. ;) ) Poems about shi.t are cool.
    | Posted on 2005-05-03 00:00:00 | by WD20x2 | [ Reply to This ]
      What a piece of [censored]...no just kidding. Good poem, its nice to see a little toilet humor here and there. I think every poem should be ended with something clever, so, good job.
    | Posted on 2005-04-25 00:00:00 | by Patricio | [ Reply to This ]
      HaHa, I rarely see a poem that has a comedic undertone. Good write. I'm glad that something on this site made me smile a little. :)
    ~LeAnna~
    | Posted on 2005-04-24 00:00:00 | by RedRoseofBlood | [ Reply to This ]


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