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    dots Submission Name: My Reindots
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    Author: ChaosSubmission
    ASL Info:    16/F/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.34 - 18/30/8
    Words: 50
    Class/Type: Poetry/Them
    Total Views: 832
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 307



    Description:
       This isn't very good and i wrote it a long time ago. I submitted it somewhere else and some people liked it. Just tell me mainly what you think. Don't worry, i'm not going to take over the world...like i could...haha


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    dotsMy Reindots
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    All shall perish in my peril
    When my wrath becomes real
    Eternity of chaos shall be mine
    Reuniting all I feel
    The world shall suffer with me
    Under this dark sky of evil times
    The trueness of my terror will make them all see
    For endless minds are blind




    Submitted on 2005-04-23 23:34:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      u 4got the evil laugh(MUHAHAHAHAHA) wich is the best part of bragging about ur master plan of world dommination...
    and u gotta make it longer cuz u cant jus brag for 5 seconds altho it is indeed great

    R.I.P
    Darkness of the Grim Draco
    | Posted on 2005-04-24 00:00:00 | by darkness | [ Reply to This ]
      wow really good

    but i think u good have made it longer and expressed more fellings but other than that it was great keep up the good work
    | Posted on 2005-04-24 00:00:00 | by s33d | [ Reply to This ]


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