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    dots Submission Name: Esteir'ili, or, Emotionlessdots
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    Author: Ata_Khai
    ASL Info:    16/M/US
    Elite Ratio:    2.83 - 31/46/16
    Words: 153
    Class/Type: Story/Death
    Total Views: 227
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 844



    Description:
       This is basically a poetic recounting of an Elf who, after seeing his only love be raped and killed, killed the man who did it.


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    dotsEsteir'ili, or, Emotionlessdots
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    There is no emotion in this realm.

    I cannot feel the icy air brush my cheek, nor the dripping of water in the pure steel in my hand.

    I cannot smell the taint washing over her mind, her soul, nor can I smell the blood on her lips.

    I cannot hear her cries of pain, nor can I hear the fear in her eyes.

    I cannot see her cries of agony and torment, nor can I see the pool of blood forming in her eyes.

    I cannot experience the beauty of my blade sliding into your flesh, nor the blood flowing down the edge. I cannot know the pain you feel, the fear of acknowledgment, the realization your lifeblood is leaving you.

    I cannot know the emotions I live for. Only the hatred I have learned to embrace.

    Khe’indeir esil Khai, e esil mati beial aldir.




    Submitted on 2005-04-24 02:16:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      weird. just... weird. it had the feel of a code of honor... they way it read... i love the switch to speaking in tongues- i can't really figure out what language that is, but i'm guessing something similar to norse or gaelic of some type? nice work .*md*
    | Posted on 2005-04-24 00:00:00 | by MerryDeath | [ Reply to This ]
      wow, this is so goosebumpy! your desription made this a very interesting read, thanks for that :)

    still, try to post it in a different format. should work better.
    | Posted on 2005-04-24 00:00:00 | by vedanta19 | [ Reply to This ]



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