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    dots Submission Name: Shattereddots
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    Author: RymingQueen
    Elite Ratio:    2.19 - 9/14/7
    Words: 150
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Longing
    Total Views: 264
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 913



    Description:
       This is a just all thing poem...leave e what you think...


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    dotsShattereddots
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    Looking through the stained glass is hard to do..
    Maybe you should make it disappear then
    But if you do what will they say?
    Will they talk of how bad and insecure you are?
    They all love to talk you should know that
    They will look for you doubts of desire and make them even higher
    Maybe I am not perfect on throug
    But I'm not going to shatter
    They can't see through me...
    To them I don't even matter
    I will be back to do my encore..
    But for now all I can do is jut be here to breathe
    They really don't care do they?
    They don't care how far they look into your soul
    They just keep searching for your doubt..
    Talk of it..
    And make it shatter..
    Shatterd love
    Shattered life...
    I won't be the one to day to shatter myself it wouldn't be so nice.....




    Submitted on 2005-04-24 14:28:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Whoah, I should show this to someone who doesn't understand why people keep saying things to him. He doesn't believe me when I say that when people say things to him, that they're just trying to get to him. it kinda described me too because people can't see through me and I don't matter to a lot of people. i love it. great write!
    ~kriss
    | Posted on 2005-04-24 00:00:00 | by juss_kriss | [ Reply to This ]



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