Hold Your Hand -------------------------------------------
Just slit the surface of the skin
Let the pain drain in
Let the blood seep out
I can’t do without
Just go a little deeper
Let the knife sink in
Let the blood be drawn out
Holding it there
Take the knife out
Just a little deeper
Just a couple more
Let the blood run down
Replace it with fear
Don’t tell me you’re too scared
Just hold your hand out
I’ll only slit the surface
Only a little blood
Only a little pain
Don’t tell me you’re too scared
Just tear the surface of the skin
Let the poison drain in
Let my scream seep out
I can’t do without
Just a little more
Let the poison mix in
morbid,dark,but interesting and a good write. at first i thought about commenting on the lack of punctuation,but in hindsight,it flows better without,so kudos on that.for some reason,it reminds me of that scene in Fight Club with the lye burn...mneh.good write,overall,i look forward to more of your stuff! <3MiA
wow, i love it so much, man, you should so read my poem 'leaving', it is almost like this one, it has great words and everything... i love the rhyming you used... i can not wait to read more of your work. You did great i love this poem, keep up the good work...
P.S. my favorite part is: Just tear the surface of the skin Let the poisin drain in Let my scream seep out I can't do without Just a little more Let the pioson mix in.
I have not read all your poems, But do they all include blood? This is by far, the least scary one, but I think it'll scare my soul out if someone with a knife recites the poem!
Submission Name: Hold Your Hand
