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    dots Submission Name: SelfDestructingdots
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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 71
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    Description:
       I hate that the fact that I don't want this person fucks with me...like it gives me all this stress...and bah...read it.


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    dotsSelfDestructingdots
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    my head hurts
    throught the pain it's hard to see
    why am I so annoyed with the thought of you
    I felt indifferent
    I felt unmoved
    but these feelings overwhelm me and I guess I kid myself
    I guess lies are hiding in my head

    that's why it hurts
    my faults cause me pain
    pain that blurrs my vision
    self destruction
    and all because I don't want to love you




    Submitted on 2005-04-25 14:27:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I agree, it is right to the point...is this about dustin?...well if it is, tell me whenever i call you...[censored] whoever says "well this needs to be capitalized or puntuated"..lol...i mean who really gives a [censored]..maybe they put it that way...[censored]in A, lol...later jazzy
    | Posted on 2005-04-29 00:00:00 | by medicated | [ Reply to This ]
      Short, but sweet. Right to the point. We all could give ourselves headaches because we don't want to love. Loving someone takes a lot out of you so many people are reluctant to just give it away so easily causing ourselves more pain than needed.
    | Posted on 2005-04-25 00:00:00 | by SmoothePapa | [ Reply to This ]


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