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    dots Submission Name: Obvious Answerdots
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    Author: EL
    Elite Ratio:    3.39 - 272/189/52
    Words: 82
    Class/Type: Poetry/Me
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    dotsObvious Answerdots
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    I hold the secrets
    that no one knows
    I feel the pain noone feels
    I see the things that can't be seen
    I alone know all your fears,
    Your dreams and desires to.
    I can hear the deceit that your eyes speak
    I understand what is said between each line
    I know the questions
    that constantly storm your mind
    Who am I you may ask
    Here it is plain as day
    Here it is your one word obvious answer
    You.




    Submitted on 2005-04-25 16:17:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      oh [censored] this makes me want to run away with the girl i love and explore her mind forever with nobody else around for some odd reason. i like the enders game series and that somehow remeinds me of it.
    | Posted on 2005-05-16 00:00:00 | by locke | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow, interesting. Kinda confusing at first, but good. I had to read it like 3 times before I really understood what you were saying. (Lol, I'm so slow. ^-^)Great write.
    ~kriss
    | Posted on 2005-04-25 00:00:00 | by juss_kriss | [ Reply to This ]


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