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    dots Submission Name: Am I Falling in....dots

    Author: EL
    Elite Ratio:    3.39 - 272/189/52
    Words: 134
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsAm I Falling in....dots

    Afraid to close my eyes
    Still afraid to keep them open.
    I know you are standing there
    I know you are very near.
    Terrified to feel what I have begone to feel
    Terrified to let you see what I see.
    To scared to move forward,
    For one step forward is another closer to you
    To scared to share this emotion that has developed inside.
    Fearful of the passion I feel towards you,
    For passion leads to the fulfilment of desires,
    Desires that I can't possibly have,
    Or can I?
    Can it be?
    Is this emotion real,
    Is the passion more then what it seems to be?
    Is this really happening?
    Am I falling in......no it can't be,
    Can it?
    Is what I fear,
    Is this the love I have for so long wanted?

    Submitted on 2005-04-25 17:38:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      You might as well of wrote this for me~ I love it!
    I can fully relate to it and love the way that you put everything etc...

    great job-

    | Posted on 2005-04-25 00:00:00 | by joy7542 | [ Reply to This ]
      what!! This is great. Could this be it, what I have been waiting this feeling that all human beings fall under the power of. The invisible, mystical love well could be or can it?

    | Posted on 2005-04-25 00:00:00 | by SmoothePapa | [ Reply to This ]
      wow! omg.. im amazed!i really like everything about this poem... the message, the writin ..etc.. i seriously really like this poem.. im really glad i took the time to read this... GREAT JOB!! WONDERFULWONDERFUL!!
    *going to my faves!!*
    love it
    keep writing and ill keep reading

    | Posted on 2005-04-25 00:00:00 | by anita_89 | [ Reply to This ]
      wow. i can totally relate to this. this reminds me of when me and my ex first started going out. great poem. few typos, but oh well. no ones perfect.
    | Posted on 2005-04-25 00:00:00 | by juss_kriss | [ Reply to This ]
      omg i heart this! the format was awsome and the words you used were grrrrr8! Ima make this one of my new favorites! hehe...oh could u check out my poem "stone angels"? thanx in advance...I LOVE THIS I LOVE THIS I LOVE THIS! lol

    Love from within
    | Posted on 2005-04-25 00:00:00 | by Thinkingofyou | [ Reply to This ]

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