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    dots Submission Name: Tomorrowdots
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    Author: DanceADream
    ASL Info:    16 f canada
    Elite Ratio:    5.05 - 205/153/29
    Words: 67
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       meh lol it is what it is


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    dotsTomorrowdots
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    In the dark
    I feel alone,
    Ifeel pain and sorrow,
    With lost hopes for tomorrow.
    But tomorrows hopes
    Will not come,
    For the blind man can't see
    The rising sun.
    As the deaf man can't hear
    A morning birds song
    And that is why
    Tomorrow never comes.
    I embrace each day,
    Just one at a time
    With no hopes
    And no dreams
    For tomorrow.




    Submitted on 2005-04-25 19:29:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i have been there... i really do not like to feel the feeling... but reading about it is kind of cool... i liked your poem... it was a very good poem...
    | Posted on 2005-04-25 00:00:00 | by Esophagus1 | [ Reply to This ]
      i understand your philosophy to live in the "now." it such an astounding feat. to be able to give it full support. there are only a few people i know with that kind of trait and maintains it through the different seasons of their lives and... i applaud them even though i'd be one of those who'd quickly think they are crazy at a mile view. truth be told... i'm a bit envious.
    | Posted on 2005-04-25 00:00:00 | by ANGELO | [ Reply to This ]
      incredible write. it's so hopeless and filled with the real emotion of despair, i love it. keep up the writing
    -the wildchild
    | Posted on 2005-04-25 00:00:00 | by wildchild | [ Reply to This ]


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