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    dots Submission Name: thanks sheriffdots
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    Author: shockking
    ASL Info:    36/m/MI
    Elite Ratio:    3.9 - 8/11/4
    Words: 35
    Class/Type: Limerick/What you did
    Total Views: 741
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 226



    Description:
       this came about while reading a lovely entry by pestiferous.........o tribute to thee one-eyed warren.


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    dotsthanks sheriffdots
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    there once was a slinger
    a real quick flinger
    of an agent that caused stinging pain

    said a victimized lass
    as she fell on her ass
    "you've got it in my eyes once again!"




    Submitted on 2005-04-25 22:34:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Well technically not a limerick, still a funny piece. Heh, I said piece...Love the title, but am a little confused as to why the sheriff is letting someone cum in her eye. Thanks.
    His Assholiness-
    | Posted on 2005-04-28 00:00:00 | by His Assholiness | [ Reply to This ]
      LOL, this is a really cute little poem! I am gonna add it to my favorites list because it made me smile thru my frustration... thanx for a little giggle!
    | Posted on 2005-04-26 00:00:00 | by psycho_1 | [ Reply to This ]


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