Description: The river & bubblez..."i'm" always so thankful to God that "i" have the environment "i" have 2 be inspired!!!
Hyproglo & "i" drinking wine by the waters of the American River & blowing bubblez 2 "infinity & beyond"....
Great week 2 ALL!!!
well, what can i say, i freakin really enjoyed reading this! i loved how you painted such a vibrant and active picture with minimal words. yeah, some of it is confusing, but that's fine, i'm not a big fan of closure or happy endings anyway. so, all that to say "very very well done" :)
mmmmm...bubbles. Delicate and they float along their ways. Drifting over waves and the colors in the sunlight are just as you described them. This was a very peaceful and serene piece of writing. Good to the last *pop*
:) Nice Imagery...bubble,bubbles everywhere :)...as far as the Son...;>} becomes "C" life...is this perhaps a reference of watching your son swimming in the river?...My interpretive skills are not that good at 4:30, but tha'ts what I'm thinkin :)
well you completely had me through this piece not only was i envisioning bubbles and all their beautiful colors in the sunlight but I had this peaceful and serene feeling...then i got to "drifting 2 "Son:... ; > } become "C" life" and got completely lost...*says in buggs bunny voice* "maybe i made a wrong turn in Albuquerque"
if you could explain that last part to my daft mind perhaps then I can become one with this piece...