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    dots Submission Name: Pixie Stix & Lupinedots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 30
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 774
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    Description:
       Do "u" ever get 2 the point where "u" find that everything "u've" tried 2 potray in poetic verse is just repeated & no one, save a few, get "IT"????
    I'm gong 2 start re-submitting 1st posts & C if anyone knowz the difference....
    "IT"Z" not like writer's block..."IT"Z" like reader'z block....
    Love, Peace, Joy!!!
    Great Week 2 All!!!
    epiph the Tiffarina Ballerina!


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    dotsPixie Stix & Lupinedots
    -------------------------------------------


    Pixie stix
    &
    Lupine
    Flowerz
    powder
    fine
    Colorz melt
    2
    mine...; > }
    Candy is
    an
    epiphany....
    Think u
    R
    fine ; > }
    Find "1"
    Gold
    mind....




    Submitted on 2005-04-25 23:26:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I'm not sure if I understand it completely, but it was something different to read. It was quick and the format seemed to suit it nicely... this seems like some little phrase type thing you'd find on one of those shirts with all the words....

    -LucyDiamond
    | Posted on 2005-04-30 00:00:00 | by LucyDiamond | [ Reply to This ]
      Well, I did not get anything other than things melting into one...creating an epiphany. Your analogy of pixie stix powder and lupine flowers was subtly done and I can tell this is a write you are proud of. If you have writers or readers block, you hide it well because it doesnt show here. Have a great one and keep writin'
    | Posted on 2005-04-26 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      Not really sure what to make of this. I like wordplay, but ultimately it needs to say something. Other than 'I like candy' (dunno who doesn't), I really don't get this. Sorry...it's me, not 'u'.
    | Posted on 2005-04-26 00:00:00 | by joeyalphabet | [ Reply to This ]


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