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    dots Submission Name: If you read you will judge(KC)dots
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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 74
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Serious
    Total Views: 725
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    Bytes: 413



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       The title for crediting purposes is on the cover of Kurt Cobains journal.


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    Hey you...I think that you are cool for reading this. I think my friend Amber is insane and I like one of my bestfriends and I didn't know until like yesterday that I liked him. You guys are gonna be mad at me for posting this huh.BAH!!
    Gas is too high and I hate that there are many many hypocrits and I don't like those...anyone feel the same way.don't judge me!buh byes
    whateverz.




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      in a sad narsacistic way it's kinda funny. Everyone hates hippocryts, however i've yet to meet one whose not one, at least on some level; which poses an intriging question...if everyone is in fact a hippocrit and everyone hates hippocrits', does anyone really love another, or ones-self?
    | Posted on 2005-05-04 00:00:00 | by dismentled | [ Reply to This ]
      i hate a hrpocrite as well and am thoughtful that we all have been one at one time or another,i tries to keep myself in check so as ia am one not that often as others.
    i learned a long time ago to care not of others peoples attitudes or opinions,people in crowds are scandoulous and the more of em you put in a room,the dumber they get
    lol
    wes all toyysruss
    | Posted on 2005-04-26 00:00:00 | by toyysruss | [ Reply to This ]


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