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    dots Submission Name: IM HERE!dots
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    Author: punk_rock_chick
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 7/12/4
    Words: 44
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Serious
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    dotsIM HERE!dots
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    Im here waiting for you,
    do you see me?

    Im here talking to you,
    do you hear me?

    I will be here for you forever and
    always.......I know how bad he hurt
    you....scaring you for life....but im here
    ALWAYS AND FOREVER!!!!




    Submitted on 2005-04-26 17:37:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      thanxx every-1 for there reply srry i can't get bck 2 u on ur page but havent been able to get on thankxx 4 all the thought and thanxx 4 reading my poem/random thoughts thing! lol


    pm me if you get time! !chick unknown!
    | Posted on 2005-05-14 00:00:00 | by punk_rock_chick | [ Reply to This ]
      this poem needs a little bit of work even though it puts out the meaning. you should make it a little bit longer and put more detail into it.
    This was a good poem though, i like the actual "you waiting" it was appealing.
    ACE
    | Posted on 2005-05-02 00:00:00 | by Ace | [ Reply to This ]
      nice message, sure. random thoughts? definitely. clichéd? used in pop songs? um, yeah. emotion? yep. venting? definitely. style development? nope. flow? yeah, it's there.try to say it originally though.
    | Posted on 2005-04-26 00:00:00 | by lukewarm | [ Reply to This ]
      nice message for a friend it good to know someone is there good work keep it up

    life is to be fortifed by many friendships -to love
    and to beloved is the grestest happiness of existence - Sydney Smith
    | Posted on 2005-04-26 00:00:00 | by littlepoet | [ Reply to This ]


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