this poem needs a little bit of work even though it puts out the meaning. you should make it a little bit longer and put more detail into it. This was a good poem though, i like the actual "you waiting" it was appealing. ACE
nice message, sure. random thoughts? definitely. clichéd? used in pop songs? um, yeah. emotion? yep. venting? definitely. style development? nope. flow? yeah, it's there.try to say it originally though.