Description: Sorry yaw this is jus a poem that was randomly thought up and thought i would share it!
No Win Here -------------------------------------------
This is My dream
falling out
Of love
In to my heart wasting time of yours
there is no one i can see
but you you are the winner right?
The loser is me...yeah it is
no one loves no one cares....
So leave this alone..
There is no win here
Sounds like me when I'm alone with a bottle of Jack. I can relate. I like to justify everyone else's actions and leave myself only to blame, leaving myself as the "loser". Good job.
This was ok, not really to my taste but it was still done well. The flow was a bit choppy but other then that and the fact that you placed you twice in a row I don't see any problemes.
Submission Name: No Win Here
