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Author: mimi
ASL Info:    30/f/ny
Elite Ratio:    3.66 - 597 /390 /111
Words: 106
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Came to share a glass of wine
and catch a game, a show,
share a joke, a smoke.
Have a date.
It was too late,
and too early in or acquaintance
for me to acquiesce
to what you have in mind.
I want to let you
slide your lips
glide your hips
and smooth the tremors.
I sip the wine
and focus on the
Not the touch of your hands
your demands.
I think of what should be, could be
would be if I
let you slide your lips
glide your hips
and guide your way inside of me

Submitted on 2005-04-28 02:40:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Very hot! And too the point. I think this was a good read1. I think I will read some more of your stuff? If you would like come and read some of mine?
| Posted on 2005-10-12 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]
  This reminds me of Friday Night Standup inside a cafe that uses Snappy fingers to Clap instead of actually clapping. This made me smile really big...Thanks for the poem!

| Posted on 2005-04-28 00:00:00 | by calling eve | [ Reply to This ]

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