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    dots Submission Name: They Say...dots
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    Author: Latin King
    ASL Info:    31/M/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    2.39 - 104/232/145
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsThey Say...dots
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    They say,
    That I'm not good enough
    To live up to my goals,
    Not knowing,
    That their words are rough
    And can damage the soul.

    They say,
    That this life I lead
    Has no route in mind,
    Not knowing,
    That the life they live
    Is not the same as mine.

    They say,
    That my intentions
    Aren't pure;
    Not knowing,
    That their allegations
    Aren't for sure.

    They say,
    That my struggles,
    Are nothing new;
    They can say all they want,
    But they don't know,
    What the fuck I've been through.




    Submitted on 2005-04-28 11:31:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Nice write. You keep it up you're on to something. People say a lot of things but never know the true situation of a person. This what makes proving them wrong so fun.

    Smoothepapa
    | Posted on 2005-04-28 00:00:00 | by SmoothePapa | [ Reply to This ]
      i loved this write, what you have written is sooo true, and it does hurt when people say that you dont know what love is, that your just a kid and havnt experience life yet, it pisses me off when people say that to me, thanx for sharing and keep em cumin x x x x
    | Posted on 2005-04-28 00:00:00 | by secret kisses | [ Reply to This ]


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