Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: They Say...dots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Latin King
    ASL Info:    31/M/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    2.39 - 104/232/145
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 623
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 672



    Description:
       The Truth!


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsThey Say...dots
    -------------------------------------------


    They say,
    That I'm not good enough
    To live up to my goals,
    Not knowing,
    That their words are rough
    And can damage the soul.

    They say,
    That this life I lead
    Has no route in mind,
    Not knowing,
    That the life they live
    Is not the same as mine.

    They say,
    That my intentions
    Aren't pure;
    Not knowing,
    That their allegations
    Aren't for sure.

    They say,
    That my struggles,
    Are nothing new;
    They can say all they want,
    But they don't know,
    What the fuck I've been through.




    Submitted on 2005-04-28 11:31:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      Nice write. You keep it up you're on to something. People say a lot of things but never know the true situation of a person. This what makes proving them wrong so fun.

    Smoothepapa
    | Posted on 2005-04-28 00:00:00 | by SmoothePapa | [ Reply to This ]
      i loved this write, what you have written is sooo true, and it does hurt when people say that you dont know what love is, that your just a kid and havnt experience life yet, it pisses me off when people say that to me, thanx for sharing and keep em cumin x x x x
    | Posted on 2005-04-28 00:00:00 | by secret kisses | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    56549

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    The Severed Head written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Devils in the Details written by endlessgame23
    Etiquette written by saartha
    Primitive Lapse written by Crestfallenman
    True Death written by layDsayD
    winners circle written by ShyOne
    Or are we written in the sand? written by Chelebel
    Ache written by rev.jpfadeproof
    descent written by TheBadSadMan
    Every..... written by jackz
    4th of July written by layDsayD
    Shi written by ShyOne
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (final) written by endlessgame23
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Waiting written by Daniel Barlow
    Red Barn written by rev.jpfadeproof
    untitled written by ShyOne
    Blood Stains Are The Worst written by ForgottenGraves
    Alone in the Crowd written by SavedDragon
    Your Lover written by Cordell
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Carry written by saartha
    Summer written by layDsayD
    PEARL (Exclusive Poem) 10th Anniversary... written by Cordell
    Love written by saartha
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (7) written by endlessgame23
    Cover written by saartha
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (5) written by endlessgame23
    Cosmic Dreams written by Chelebel
    the living moment written by ShyOne

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry