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    dots Submission Name: Sweet Ecstacydots
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    Author: kp_2007
    ASL Info:    17/F/MI
    Elite Ratio:    3.51 - 109/94/21
    Words: 134
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
    Total Views: 889
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       I wrote this when I was really missing my special someone.


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    dotsSweet Ecstacydots
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    Missing you every day, every second I think of you. The way I feel when you hold me, your skin against mine. Two hearts intwined in secret, in the shadows of our lives. I'll take you with me where ever I go. Will you take me, will you bring me into the light of your life? Your lips toucing mine is sweet ecstacy that I savor. I can feel them pressing against mine in loving passion long after you've gone. Every second that your gone my heart breaks, shatters in a million peices. Then the thought of you and I together unites all the peices in aching relief. When we're together hold me close and hold me tight, kiss me softly and love me sweetly.




    Submitted on 2005-04-28 12:43:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      so, we write about some of the same stuff,huh??
    it was exellent. i didnt see anything wrong with it
    | Posted on 2005-05-05 00:00:00 | by zack | [ Reply to This ]
      LMAO. I am really tired. I thought I hadn't posted yet... ok... I need sleep... (I have to say something for a critique thing...) It sucked...(jk)
    | Posted on 2005-04-28 00:00:00 | by BrokenAngel | [ Reply to This ]
      I still don't understand why I'm doing this... But here it goes. This is well written, again, try putting your stuff into a seperate line format for easier reading. Right.
    | Posted on 2005-04-28 00:00:00 | by BrokenAngel | [ Reply to This ]
      Very sweet. The flow of this one is good, and I like the poem in general. Try putting your poems into a different format. Might make it easier for people to read...
    | Posted on 2005-04-28 00:00:00 | by BrokenAngel | [ Reply to This ]
      i love it its so romantic and heartfelt...it really touches your heart.its really sad when you say you heart brakes when hes gone and everything...its so sad.great piece!
    | Posted on 2005-04-28 00:00:00 | by intoxicated411 | [ Reply to This ]


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