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    dots Submission Name: Ramblingdots
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    Author: ashlee_jane2003
    ASL Info:    24-female-Indianapolis
    Elite Ratio:    3.39 - 210/210/39
    Words: 61
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Longing
    Total Views: 218
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 402



    Description:
       The thought process that goes through my head when I think about him. Bash it if you want but this is the perfect picture of raw emotion that could ever be painted.


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    dotsRamblingdots
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    I need to feel you
    Breathing.. touching.. loving
    I need to tell you
    How bad it feels.
    I need to touch you
    your lips, your hands, your...
    I remember coffee in the morning.
    I dream about the beauty that once was.
    I fear
    What used to happen.
    I'm dying to know
    Your thoughts, your dreams, why?
    Did you really mean it?




    Submitted on 2005-04-28 13:55:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Coffee in the morning. .

    I need to feel touch. .

    You jus tneed to know and rememeber. Live in that moment that once made you happy. I could see all this happening. Could even smell the coffee I think. . .

    ~BCute
    | Posted on 2005-05-04 00:00:00 | by BCute | [ Reply to This ]
      "I remember coffee in the morning..."
    It's so small, isn't it? The little moments that seem to capture and captivate us, mesmerize us to the point where we need to write it down...share it with the world and say, "Look at this! Look at how damn beautiful it was." Coffee in the morning can be breath taking...
    | Posted on 2005-05-03 00:00:00 | by nebnim | [ Reply to This ]
      i definately can relate. this could be a very powerful and excellent piece if you cleaned it up and expanded a bit on your idea
    | Posted on 2005-04-28 00:00:00 | by brokensmile | [ Reply to This ]
      crasy picture does not quite suit the piece other than that i hope the answer to you question is good news good write interesting putting the picture and the words together
    sandman
    | Posted on 2005-04-28 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]



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