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    dots Submission Name: Always Evidentdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 37
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Love
    Total Views: 730
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 337



    Description:
       It's a breezy, rainy spring day (again!!!) & as I stare out the window @ work & see the world green & alive as can be I just had this thought....Love, Peace, Joy!!!!

    PS: The music for this piece brought to you by Penguin Cafe Orchestra ~ Steady State.


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    dotsAlways Evidentdots
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    Wisdom is not obtainable
    through knowledge
    "ITs" always evident
    & near
    Truth is not definable
    always through proof
    "IT"s always evident
    & clear
    Love is not captured
    kept in one place
    "ITs" always evident
    & near




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      Nice write. Sounds like King David forgot to add this page in Proverbs. I enjoyed it. Keep writing and keeping the world happy.



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    | Posted on 2005-04-29 00:00:00 | by xtremegentleman | [ Reply to This ]
      Note to Mr Webster:
    Dear Sir, re "mistake in dictionary"
    I have failed to find under the word: "HAPPINESS" the definition: "Tiffany, Epiphany,(Lat. ski bunny. beach bum. fosters freak) n.conj.infect.craz.
    Hoping you will rectify this oversight at your earliest, I remain
    Drunk and dreaming
    Me-um
    | Posted on 2005-04-28 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]
      Man, Tiffers, I read this again for the sixth time and just had to leave another comment to let you know how brilliant and insightful you are. Sorry for being a "comment hog", but this is just awesome and thank you for posting it. And as always, thank you for being YOU. Have a ggggggrrrrrrrrrrr8 one.
    DAVE
    | Posted on 2005-04-28 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      Tiff your poetry is so simply simple and truthful it is like a breath of fresh air. This write is pretty cool touching all the important areas of everyones lifes in such descriptive words in your unique style of writing poetry. Your style is an acquire type that I have gratefully acquired the taste and like for so keep doing "IT" Tiff cause it is YOU! `always write poetry Cheryl.
    | Posted on 2005-04-28 00:00:00 | by ladyngold | [ Reply to This ]
      Thank you for saying Something with meaning.
    I dig this read alot. Very truthful without filling up space with words. Great take.
    | Posted on 2005-04-28 00:00:00 | by childs | [ Reply to This ]
      As yes, thanks for sending somemore Lovepeacejoy my way :) A nice poem, too bad it's too cloudy over here :P :) Muy Bien :)

    L:KJ

    Stw
    | Posted on 2005-04-28 00:00:00 | by Stwcjj | [ Reply to This ]
      Tiffarina Ballarina, your wisdom, truth and love are always evident and this was a brilliant display of those qualities. All are both clear and near to you. This is a definate favorite for IT is simplicity that resounds and rebounds in such a short poetic write. Have a great on and keep smilin'
    | Posted on 2005-04-28 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      What a simple beautiful expression of truth...
    I don't know what is in your April showers there but I'm not sure the New Mexican rain could have produced such an eloquent piece...
    | Posted on 2005-04-28 00:00:00 | by Brownsdelight | [ Reply to This ]


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