Description: I wrote this for my ex...just believe me when I tell you that it was not a good time in my life...she pissed me off more than anyone had ever done and this was for her
FUCK YOU -------------------------------------------
You took my heart and you made it break!
You piece of shit!
I thought you cared a little bit!
You stupid asshole!
You stupid fuck!
You left me standing here alone like a sitting duck!
I look into your eyes and all I feel is the hate.
I have two feelings that I could debate.
I can't be mad at you when you talk to me
But, underneath all the shit, I can see.
You don't care about me.
You never did.
Don't lie to me...
I never meant anything to you!
Well, you know what? Fuck you too!
Stop fucking with my mind
You are seriously running out of time
You made me do the thing I do best.
You made me hurt myself and everyone else.
I could just hang my self from a rope made of felt.
You wouldn’t fucking care would you?!
Whatever...fuck you too!
Breathe. In through your nose and out your mouth. Think of birds flying and pretty waterfalls. Sorry, that might just piss you off more. The poem was to the point but the structure was way off and the rhyming was pretty bad. But hey, good luck.
Um... wow I liked it but it seems like you didn't put a lot of thought or time into this peice But I definently felt the anger lol. I did like the fact that you didn't really try to rhyme after every other line or so. If you did that It would have really ruined the whole flow of it. Loved it!