Poetry is how you express your feelings, nothing more. Some people can relate, and of course, some, all they care to do is pick apart everything you put down into words. I myself can relate to how you're feeling in this piece, I wish it had more length, and gone into more detail about your feelings, but even with the shortness, I can still get the jist of how you were feeling. It's a good piece all in all. Good job.
And now I have to think more. What if this person that you are referring to really does realize the full extent of your love for him? Perhaps he knows more than he lets on? I know of women who are capable of being this mysterious and I too have been known not to be so giving of my knowledge when it seems very irrelevant. But now you may wonder, why would I consider love irrelevant? Well, it isn't, to tell the truth, but still, one cannot say everything he knows just as one cannot express everything he or she feels.
It's o.k. you'll catch on after a while. Just a little more detail to this one and it could be pretty good. Even I have some poems that need plenty of work but that's what writing is all about;getting better.
looks more like a journal entry or a conversation with your best friend..not a poem.but,heyy it's all about expressing yourself.good work.cannot term this as poem, i am sure others may like this :) try working on the flow,the words(it's too simple now) and it's too short too..and about that boy..good luck!..i am sure there's someone around the corner who likes you big time..so, move on girl! :)