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    dots Submission Name: Fight Songdots
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    Author: ashlee_jane2003
    ASL Info:    24-female-Indianapolis
    Elite Ratio:    3.39 - 210/210/39
    Words: 162
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
    Total Views: 309
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1154



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       I absoulety love this poem. I didn't write it all myself; I had to have a little help. But that doesn't make it any less great.


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    dotsFight Songdots
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    Sometimes you have to say it...
    Fuck them all!

    Yes, fuck them all-
    The artsy posers
    the office blow hards
    and brown nosers.

    Fuck the type who gets the job done
    and the type who stand on pricipal;
    the down-to-earth and understated;
    the overhyped and underrated.

    Project director?
    Get a bullshit detector.

    Client's mum?
    up your bum.

    You can't be nice to everyone.

    When your back is to the wall
    When they don't return your call
    When your sick of saving face
    When your screwed in any case

    Fuck culture scanners, contest winners,
    subtle thinkers and the hacks who offend them;
    people who give catered dinners
    and (the saddest of sinners) the sheep who attend them-

    Which is to say fuck yourself
    and the person you were: polite and mature,
    a real trooper for good. The beauty is-
    they'll soon forget you

    and if they don't
    they probably should
    (for their sake)




    Submitted on 2005-04-29 11:19:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Well, I'd comment, but seeing as how the meaning of this poem is "[censored] what everyone else thinks," that would be a bit silly!
    | Posted on 2005-05-09 00:00:00 | by Pax Parvani | [ Reply to This ]
      [censored] them all
    the sad the mad
    the glad the good
    the hood the gangsta
    the wannabes the wankstas
    the children the kids
    the future what is
    [censored] what has been
    [censored] the has-beens
    [censored] the schools
    [censored] your rules
    [censored] the basketballs players
    and [censored] their huge pools
    [censored] the war [censored] the pres
    [censored] iran until its dead
    rape it of its inbred gold
    feed off its poverty
    wait... [censored] gold
    [censored] the elections [censored] the youth
    [censored] the lies [censored] the truth
    [censored] everything i might've missed
    [censored] the world cuz jizza's pissed
    ...[censored]. lmao~nahlij
    | Posted on 2005-05-04 00:00:00 | by Aknahlij_d 1 | [ Reply to This ]
      Yes certainly

    [censored] them all.

    This might be my new anthem. [censored] everything, everyone, and just live for yourself. [censored] what everyone else thinks. [censored] em. [censored] em.

    ~BCute
    | Posted on 2005-05-04 00:00:00 | by BCute | [ Reply to This ]
      heh. "Project director?
    Get a bull[censored] detector." good line. The rest was pretty good, but not as good as that line.
    | Posted on 2005-05-03 00:00:00 | by WD20x2 | [ Reply to This ]
      lol...Ashlee, you've captured the epitome of human nature in it's truest form: Bitterness. I'm not usually a pessimist, but I have to agree with this whole-heartedly. Everyone, regardless of how sweet and sincere and honest they are, feels like this every once in a while. It's blunt, brash, a touch crude, but all together something not many people have the gall to say. Bravo darling
    | Posted on 2005-05-03 00:00:00 | by nebnim | [ Reply to This ]
      Only one thing: AWSOME! I praise you for the bold and truthful meaning! You could probley just keep going and going with this.
    | Posted on 2005-05-02 00:00:00 | by rahvyn | [ Reply to This ]
      wow... that's really funny. i feel like this at work sometimes, but of course, i could never admit it or else they would fire my ass. yeah, i have a built in bs detector, but i think it's on the fritz cuz it's always going off... maybe people are just lying to me more... anyway, nicely put. love it.
    | Posted on 2005-05-01 00:00:00 | by Phoenix2004 | [ Reply to This ]
      thanx for our comments on prisoner i stil think the picture rocks and does suit this poem sounds like you ae tired of getting pushed around in this piece it is nice when we get to say what you have here
    great write great and funny read
    thanx again
    sandman
    | Posted on 2005-04-29 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      I like the humor.
    "project director?"
    "Get a bull[censored] detector"
    I love that [censored]. I wish I had a bull[censored] detector for those who like to lie a lot.
    | Posted on 2005-04-29 00:00:00 | by SmoothePapa | [ Reply to This ]
      whoa that's [censored]in' funny! and completely true and that's sad! a bull[censored] detector would drive me crazy cuz it'd always be going off! funny read!
    | Posted on 2005-04-29 00:00:00 | by misty_of_moon | [ Reply to This ]



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